Revenge is a kind of wild justice. - Francis Bacon, Sr.
|The Terror of Ol' Pete|
since this 32-page ghost story of revenge and retribution was based on a tale author Ruth Jackson heard from her father and uncles, i also feel that it would be better read aloud.
i am not so sure, however, if The Terror of Ol' Pete, published by Dorrance Publishing, would be a good fit for young readers ages 12 and under who enjoy a little fright. an extramarital liaison is mentioned which is crucial to the story so parental guidance is still strongly recommended. if parents or guardians are okay with it then this horror story could be told over a campfire, during sleepovers, on stormy nights or during a temporary power outage.
even though i find the vocabulary, sentence construction and plot a trifle simple, i was getting along fine until i saw two words that the author used in one of the dialogs. Sarah told her husband to "stay cool."
i think "stay cool" was a little off for the period in which the story was set. i am no historian or linguistic expert but i doubt if that exact phrase was in popular usage during that time to mean the same thing as we do today. i did a little research and learned that the slangy expression "cool as a cucumber" which is still with us turned up in the eighteenth century. that phrase would have been historically more appropriate.
anyway, i find the story too juvenile for my taste now but i sure would have enjoyed this if i were younger.
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my personal rating is:
The Terror of Ol' Pete contains material that may not be suitable for younger readers 12 & under. parental guidance recommended.
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